I read all my manuscripts out loud. It’s not just spelling errors or missing words that I’m looking for. It’s things like this.
Cassie looked ahead, expecting to see the Queen’s Court, but the road through the forest still wove through the trees.
No kidding. Really? The forest had trees in it? Wow.
Maybe I should just say…
Cassie looked ahead, expecting to see the Queen’s Court, but the road still wove through the forest.
Someone needs to write about a forest which doesn’t have trees.
Would that be a petrified forest?
I’ve heard it’s often possible to see no forest for all the trees.
If a tree falls in a forest where there’s no trees… wait…