Shades of Milk and Honey

Shades of Milk and Honey — The unedited original draft of Chapter one

Edited to add:The following chapter is the rough draft I wrote for NaNoWriMo in 2006 and is posted in unedited form. The finished book came out in 2010 from Tor, edited by Liz Gorinsky.  You may read the final, published version of the first chapter, if you’d like to compare the two.

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NaNoWriMo begins!

Right. I got back to the U.S. yesterday and I’m leaving for Austin tomorrow. Will someone remind me of what I was thinking? Here’s the first thirteen lines of Shades of Milk and Honey. The Wentworths of Long Parkmead had the regard of their neighbors in every respect. Mr. Charles Wentworth, though a second son,

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