Extra: The original outline for Shades of Milk and Honey

Character List:

• Miss Jane Wentworth – The oldest daughter of Mr. Charles Wentworth.
• Miss Melody Wentworth – Her younger sister. A great beauty.
• Mr. Charles Wentworth – The second son of an old British family, presiding over an entailed estate. Respectable, gentlemen farmer.
• Mrs. Charles Wentworth – Much given to neuralgia and vapors.
• Mr. Edmund Dunkirk – The eldest son of the Baronet of Downsferry. Stands to inherit a sizeable estate.
• Miss Elizabeth (Beth) Dunkirk – The only daughter of the Baronet and sister of Mr. Dunkirk.
• Mr. Christopher Dunkirk – The younger son of the Baronet of Downsferry[ref]Poor guy got cut from the story almost completely.[/ref]
• Lady FitzCameron of Banbree Manor- Dowager with an eligible daughter.
• Miss Livia FitzCameron – Daughter, known to use magic to cover her horse teeth.
• Mr. David Vincent – Artist who creates murals with magic for nobility. Currently in residence at Lady FitzCameron’s
• Captain Jack [ref]Clearly, I had to change his name because Captain Jack was just too distracting.[/ref]Livingston – The nephew of the Lady FitzCameron

1. Jane Wentworth has an attachment to Mr. Dunkirk, as does her sister Melody. Jane determines that she should suppress her own interests in him, so as not to hurt her sister’s chances.
2. Jane comforts Melody.
3. At nuncheon, the family learns that the FitzCamerons plan to hold a ball to welcome home their nephew, Mr. Harold Livingston, a Captain in the Navy.
4. In which Jane and Melody go to town to pick fabric for new dresses for the ball. Mr. Dunkirk is there escorting his sister for the same purpose.
5. Dunkirks come to call. Melody is jealous. Jane faints.
6. At the ball, Jane sees Mr. David Vincent, an magic arts muralist (glamourist) who is creating a diorama for the FitzCameron’s dining room. Captain Livingston flirts with Melody.
7. Berry-picking party. Jane is pressured into creating a pantomime [ref]See, I hadn’t come up with the word tableau vivant yet[/ref]with Mr. Vincent.
8. Berry-picking party continued. After the pantomime, Mr. Vincent takes his leave. On the way home, Melody falls and sprains ankle.
9. Livingston and Dunkirk come to call on Melody. Some posturing between them. Jane realizes that Melody has not sprained her ankle after all.
10. At home. Jane evades Dunkirk, believing that he has come to call on Melody. Spends time with his sister instead. Mr. Vincent arrives at end of Chapter
11. Mr. Vincent has been sent by Lady FitzCameron to amuse Melody. Jane goes to check on her mother. Captain Livingston arrives, both men flirt with Melody.
12. Jane goes to Dunkirk and spends time with Miss Dunkirk, who hints that she is in love. Receives invitation to FitzCameron dinner party.
13. At dinner party, Jane is seated next to Mr. Dunkirk. After dinner, when the ladies retire to the drawing room, a chance comment, overheard, hurts Jane’s feelings. “Plain Jane? I should judge her fortunate if she were only plain.” She flees to the garden where–[ref]Garden? What garden? This is about where the plot starts to deviate from the published version, although there are variations in order and specifics earlier[/ref]
14. She seeks seclusion, but is almost caught (in an overwraught state) by unknown people, so she uses the invisibilty thingie [ref]”invisibility thingie” Nice technical term there[/ref] to hide. Overhears lovers, uses invisibility thingie. Realizes that it is Captain Livingston, but not certain who the girl is. He is apologizing for paying attention to Miss FitzCameron, but must in order to keep their love secret until its proper time. Jane is appalled. Lady FitzCameron asks her and Mr. Vincent to do another tableau vivant for them.
15. Mr. Vincent collapses from the effort of too much glamour. Jane, as the next most experienced glamourist, is pressed to service as his nurse until the surgeon arrives. Over the course of the next several days, Captain Livingston brings word as to Mr. Vincent’s recovery. Jane is praised as having saved his life by her quick thinking. She and her father arrange time for Captain Livingston to be alone with Melody, hoping he might propose.
16. Melody and Jane escape Mrs. Marchand’s recital of her ailments and have a conversation in the garden, during which Melody admits to having a secret lover, but will not admit who.
17. Lady FitzCameron, removes to Bath, taking Mr. Vincent with her. Several days later, Jane goes to Robinsford Abbey where Mr. Dunkirk says that he is worried about Beth and confesses her history to Jane. They agree that she probably had a one-sided attachment to Mr. Vincent and that the immediate danger is past now that he is gone. Mr. Dunkirk accidentally calls her by her maiden name, apologizing by saying, “Forgive me, Beth so often calls you by your Christian name that it has become familiar to me. I apologize deeply for the presumption.”
18. Jane calls the next day, as she arranged with Mr. Dunkirk, but Beth is in deep melancholy. She soothes her.
19. Beth awakes. More comfort. Mr. Dunkirk gives her a horse.
20. They all go riding.[ref]This was a scene that I salvaged and moved to earlier in the book[/ref]
21. Jane talks to her father about Melody. They both agree to keep an eye on her. Mr. Dunkirk arrives unexpectedly with Jane’s shawl. Father says something witty.
22. The Dunkirk parents arrive, and other guests for a house party to keep Beth amused. Soon hear that Captain Livingston has returned to Banbree Hall on business for Lady FitzCameron. Daily expect him to call. Jane wakes and hears Melody slip out.
23. She has conversation in the garden with Captain Livingston. Jane captures their words, hardly knowing why, and ties the thread off in the garden, making a silent loop.
24. Jane learns that Captain Livingston has asked for Miss Dunkirk’s hand and that she has accepted. Jane realizes that Livingston is making love to both Miss Dunkirk and Melody, and that Miss Dunkirk is the young woman that she saw him with. In turmoil, realizing that it will destroy the girl’s happiness, and also knowing that it is a conversation which she has no right to have possession of she asks Mr. Dunkirk to the garden to listen to the recording. Devastated, he determines to tell his father and ask him to deny permission for the union.
25. Jane returns home to tell Melody of Miss Dunkirk’s engagement to Captain Livingston.
26. Miss Dunkirk runs away.
27. She is found.
28. Recovering, Miss Dunkirk receives Jane and in passing mentions that she hopes to be well by the time of her brother’s marriage. “Oh, yes. They settled the engagement in Bath.” Scene where Jane congratulates Mr. Dunkirk on his good fortune. He is confused and then says, “Oh, my dear. My younger brother is marrying Miss FitzCameron.”
29. She winds up with Dunkirk and her sister winds up with Vincent.

Miss Dunkirk has a secret flirtation with Captain Livingston. Mr. Dunkirk engages Mr. Vincent to tutor her in glamour, because she is so enamoured of Jane’s abilities. When Miss Dunkirk begins hinting at a secret romance that she is unable to talk about, Jane suspects Mr. Vincent. She hints at such to Mr. Dunkirk who fires Mr. Vincent. Only when she catches Captain Livingston making love to Miss Dunkirk does she realize the truth. She records this and plays it for Mr. Dunkirk and also for Melody. Both are horrified at having been wronged but it narrowly saves the honor of both girls.[ref]I have no idea where I was planning to put this. I think it was just a note to myself[/ref]