March 2010

Be specific with actions

A reminder to myself. Be specific. When I’m cleaning up my stories, I go through and search for the word “looked” because I frequently use it as shorthand for generic body language. For example, “The AI looked genuinely unhappy” Okay… what specific piece of body language does my POV character recognize as looking genuinely unhappy? […]

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