Shades of Milk and Honey extra: Deleted scene from Chapter 2

This short scene originally completed Chapter 2. It would begin on page 35 if it were still extant.

Deleted scene: Mr. Dunkirk engaged to call... SelectShow

The reason I cut the scene was that it placed too much emphasis on the Dunkirk’s visit. Since I needed the ball to be Chapter Three, one would have gone into the scene wondering about the Dunkirk’s visit so I removed the immediacy of the engagement to visit.

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